Kimberly Jentzen's Acting With Impact offers a toolbox for actors and writers alike.

If you know of Stanislavsky, Strasberg, Adler, Meisner, and Linklater, if you studied their methods, and are serious about booking a role, you'll want to add Kimberly Jentzen to the fold. Jentzen's Acting With Impact is like a good witch's brew, a fizzy, fruity punch drawing from earlier magicians' potions, spiced with her own magical kick. Jentzen helps the actors access emotions by tracing feelings to their source. 

An actor herself and a true storyteller, Jentzen's tone and presentation in print are entertaining. If you already know her from YouTube or TikTok, you'll recognize her voice on the page.

Jentzen's Technique will be interesting and helpful to actors, the author's fellow coaches, anyone in the industry, as well as to writers who want to deepen their characters' motivation. 

"Your eyes are like pools of water, in which your very essence,

depth, emotion, and energy communicate something specific. If your

focus is engaged in the character’s thoughts, the expressions become

more authentic and believable." ~ Kimberly Jentzen

The titles of each of the eighteen lessons are followed by content details (ingredients for success) and one or more exercises. Every so many chapters offer an example of the author coaching a student. 

These sessions are great lessons in how psychological analysis and emotional intelligence help develop a deeply believable character, whether on the stage, screen, or the page. 

Throughout the book, Jentzen adds many wonderful examples to illustrate her teaching. In Lesson Eleven: Want vs. Need, for instance, it is Eli Whip, a character in the Amazon/BBC limited series The English. "Difference between what you need and what you want is what you can put on a horse."

For those who already own a copy of the first edition, it's not just the *Coaching Notes* that are added; according to the author, this is not just a second edition, but a complete rewrite.

If I were you, I'd make room for this book in your saddlebag.

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Dancing Across the Spectrum: Twists and Turns in a Neurodivergent Relationship

Disconnected: Portrait of a Neurodiverse Marriage by Eleanor Vincent
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

Eleanor Vincent's latest memoir reads like confessional prose, intimate and unsparing, yet compassionate and empathetic toward her former dancing partner/ husband, as well as herself. Revealing intimate aspects of her marriage, Vincent's experience offers a valuable lesson in understanding relationships between neurodivergent and neurotypical partners.
A must-read for anyone who knows (and loves) people on the spectrum.

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A Wizard of Earthsea - | - Always Coming Home Ursula K. Le Guin * Writing Women

Top of the morning, 5:02 a.m. PST a day after falling back. Last Saturday it would've been 6 a.m., not an unreasonable time to start the new week. Simon and Schuster surprises me with a special offer:

Celebrating the 50th anniversary of the timeless and beloved A Wizard of Earthsea, this complete omnibus edition of the entire Earthsea chronicles includes over fifty illustrations illuminating Le Guin’s vision of her classic saga.

My mind drifts, didn't I own an earlier special edition of one of Le Guin's titles? Wanting to read an excerpt, to get a taste of A Wizard of Earthsea (this links to Indie bookstores), I click on the Amazon link. Look Inside takes me to the author's list of published works, the table of content and a map of an archipelago. I scroll on to the "Introduction". The voice on the page triggers a memory of Le Guin's lecture, years ago at Centrum's Port Townsend Writers Conference. Scanning the first two pages, I'm grabbed by a sentence at the top of the third, "I've written so often of how and why it took me so long to write ..."
Intriguing and relatable.


Just a hop and a skip to the fiction book shelves and I spot the box that holds a fat paperback and old-fashioned cassette tape. Will I be able to play that? Do I still own a cassette deck? Until this moment, I have't even bothered to look inside the box. Opening Always Coming Home, Le Guin's 1984 novel, taking in the illustrations, white space, the multitude of approaches between the covers, I feel a tickling sensation in my underbelly, reminiscent of childhood excitement, of my early reader's love for books that took me away from my ordinary, to unknown worlds and places.

What Le Guin writes in the introduction about a certain literary coming of age later in life, speaks to me. I recognize the initial learning from male writers, informed by the Canon of Literature. Not until her sixties Le Guin felt the need "to write of and from my own body, my own gender, in my own voice. I'm tempted to say the latter isn't really true for me, my first published book after all was a memoir. I writing about my parents however, I've neglected my mother's point of view. High time to write of and from her body, our gender, in our voices. And time to look into Always Coming Home.



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Four Inspiring Days at PNWA 2018 Writers Conference - Craft & Business of Writing + Speed Dating with Agents & Editors

Last week I attended the PNWA2018 Conference, four days of intense focus on the craft and business of writing.

Author R.L. Stine had us in stitches

I didn't know a soul aside from PNWA's director Pam Binder, whom I've met a few times, and was happy to run into Michael Doud. We both attended a November 2017 Writers' Workshop in Pacific Grove, CA. Initially he worked with the workshop's director, but he joined Andrea Hurst's group. Michael was a finalist in the PNWA contest with the memoir he brought to Pacific Grove. On Saturday we learned he didn't win the contest, but going by the look on his face and his energetic pace he had a ball the whole time he was at the conference. Not in the last part because his memoir was finished. He carried the proof around like a pocket book (pun intended).

Donald Maass on Feelings 

A generous friend's donation allowed me to sign up for two master classes not included in the conference fee. Thus the four busy days were bookended by Donald Maass's Techniques of Timeless Storytelling on Thursday and Christopher Vogler's The Story Lives in You on Sunday.

Back at Pacific Grove, Andrea, wearing the hat of developmental editor, introduced me to The Writer's Journey. I wasn't a stranger to author Chris Vogler's source of inspiration, Joseph Cambell's oeuvre, but Vogler's adaption of Campbell's The Hero's Journey specifically for writers was a discovery. Taking his masterclass was a great way to end the conference. Vogler has internalized his material and is an engaging storyteller. Throughout, Vogler paid hommage to many others, of course Campbell, but also screenwriters and filmmakers, including the late Laura "Stand Up to Cancer" Ziskin (beloved, departed wife of screenwriter Alvin Sargent)—repeating her words that the world needs more stories with feeling. Vogler's slides and soundtrack added to the presentation and he wove important pointers for us writers throughout his narrative.

Writers Speed Dating Agents and Editors

On Friday I pitched three books. Forgiveness, my Post-WWII novel, Stroke Me Like A Guitar, a memoir on electroconvulsive therapy and music, and on a whim Painting for Life, the biography of an early recipient of the Dutch government's Post-WWII utopian program that subsidized artists. After speed dating three different agents I called it a day. On Thursday I participated in a preparatory workshop with Jason "Writing Sensei" Brick. Six writers and the coach around the table listened to and critiqued one another's 60 second pitches. After my second try, Jason suggested I'd pitch with his wife Rachel Letofsky, which I did. She requested a query and 25 pages with the voices of my two main characters. This means I have my work cut out for me the coming months.

Chris Vogler's Master Class

Arriving home, husband, household, and Airbnb needed attention, but today, two days after the conference, I managed to continue working on my novel. The questions Donald Maass suggested we'd raise concerning our characters' predicaments and convictions, really helped.
On Saturday, a PNWA staf member introduced me in the hotel lobby to an agent I hadn't addressed during the Pitch Block the previous day. The most important thing I took away from our chat is that I need to work on getting stories published in Literary Magazines. An agent I talked to at the Whidbey Island Writers Conference in 2003 told me the same, but I've just not been writing short stories so far. I'm set on sending stuff out though. I've got a plan.

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Write On! - Children's Books Writers and Illustrators

May 17, 2011 marks the first time I used Scoop-it to share articles and blog posts on writing. Seven years later I've shared a good 900 posts. Along the way "Write On!" received a silver badge. The times they are a changing, I need to make room or won't be able to keep adding new material to my Write On! Scoop-it. So I'll attempt to republish many, if not all of my previous shares.

When relevant, I'll add a note to the previously published one.

Wiesje Wollepop still makes me feel good. I'm not quite in Kindergarten and long to be able to read.

 

Click on Wiesje Wollepop, the link, and you'll be able to see all the pages in this old times favorite. In my mind I'm back in my childhood slippers, on my mother's lap, her chin resting on my head as she and I turn the pages together.

Back then, I had no clue there were an writer and illustrator behind these little characters and their adventures. My mother saved stamps that came with certain groceries, in this case coffee creamer, and sent out for books such as these. Other, larger picture books required saving extra stamps for special illustrations I got to stick on the page with glue myself. 

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Write On! - International Screenwriters Association Membership

May 17, 2011 marks the first time I used Scoop-it to share articles and blog posts on writing. Seven years later I've shared a good 900 posts. Along the way "Write On!" received a silver badge. The times they are a changing, I need to make room or won't be able to keep adding new material to my Write On! Scoop-it. So I'll attempt to republish many, if not all of my previous shares.

When relevant, I'll add a note to the previously published one.

The International Screenwriters Association is an informational resource for screenwriters worldwide. It also lobbies for pro-writer legislation the world over. Membership is currently free.

Basic membership is free. ISAConnect Member ($10 monthly / $100 yearly)

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Write On! Cambridge Dictionary Tab

May 17, 2011 marks the first time I used Scoop-it to share articles and blog posts on writing. Seven years later I've shared a good 900 posts. Along the way "Write On!" received a silver badge. The times they are a changing, I need to make room or won't be able to keep adding new material to my Write On! Scoop-it. So I'll attempt to republish many, if not all of my previous shares.

When relevant, I'll add a note to the previously published one.

British versus American English? If you need to check the difference, you might want the Cambridge Dictionary Tab on your Menu bar.

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Write On! - Follow Your Instinct Writer

May 17, 2011 marks the first time I used Scoop-it to share articles and blog posts on writing.
Seven years later I've shared a good 900 posts. Along the way "Write On!" received a silver badge. 

The times they are a changing, I need to make room or won't be able to keep adding new material to my Write On! Scoop-it. So I'll attempt to republish many, if not all of my previous shares. 

When relevant, I'll add a note to the previously published one.

Dee White writes about following your instinct as a writer and creating the story you need to write. The analogy of the big apple growing in the wild makes me hungry for more.

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Write On! - Taking Note with Apple Mémoires

Taking Note

May 17, 2011 marks the first time I used Scoop-it to share articles and blog posts on writing.
Seven years later I've shared a good 900 posts. Along the way "Write On!" received a silver badge. 

The times they are a changing, I need to make room or won't be able to keep adding new material to my Write On! Scoop-it. So I'll attempt to republish many, if not all of my previous shares. 

When relevant, I'll add a note to the previously published one.
I'm starting with the very first one, about Mémoires, an Apple note-taking-App I used at the time. 

May 17, 2011While the water for my morning tea is heating I note my first thoughts and write them down on a pad I keep on the kitchen counter. After that, while my jasmine pearl green tea is steeping I look at messages on my iPhone. Sometimes I allow myself to look at email as well. That usually is a big mistake, because my mind starts to drift. If I want to start on my Work in Process (script or book) I better not get sidetracked. I get sidetracked easily, this note is proof. Finding this program to help keep my notes together, a reward for first doing some work.

In the beginning I really liked the App, but later keeping track turned out to be a bit of a pain. The best way was to "save as" or export your journal to RTF, plain text or PDF. 
Then a friend turned me on to Evernote and I made the switch, using the Evernote clipper App happily ever since. Going by the 5* reviews of the Mémoires App on the coding robots blog others swear by it.

Doesn't matter how you do it, take note!

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August Poetry Postcard Fest 2017 - Dallas/ Hum

APPF 2017 #19

Dallas Cowboys Cheer 

Large TV screen in L.A. 

Leaders kick so high

*******

 APPF 2017 #20

Mechanical keyboard's
soft sound early a.m.
Hummingbirds
write stories on air
Perched stillness prevails
poetic silence

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August Poetry Postcard Fest 2017 - Off Leash/ Nano

APPF 2017 #17

Off leash, undone, free

Balmy wind cooling warm feet

Dog tip toes water

*******

APPF 2017 #18

Haiku for 93-year-old friend

Open drapes to view 

Sunset Blvd car chase

Old gal's boobs still young

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August Poetry Postcard Fest 2017 - Eclipse/ Blank

 

APPF 2017 #15

Eclipse & Estring

Allowing things to happen

Sun & Moon will join

*******

 APPF #16


At times there's nothing
like a cold drink of water
drawing a blank mind

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August Poetry Postcard Fest 2017 - Heather Hyer

APPF #13

Please remember her
I'm looking at the girl's face
Here for a short time

Heather Heyer I.M.

*******

APPF #14

For Heather Heyer

Chagall's cacophony in vivid colors

Heather's life in pink, purple, green

The road ahead all shades of the rainbow

Bridging worlds spread apart

Heather's portrait lit by golden rays

Her silhouette darkened by the sun

Aura sparkling, sparkling sparks

Life going by in a flash

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August Poetry Postcard Fest 2017 - Star/Chase

 APPF 2017 #11

When you wish upon
Every thing is possible
Love ignites the star

*******

APPF #12 

Overkill he said
Be here now in Hollywood
Let's cut to the chase











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August Poetry Postcard Fest 2017 - Airbnb Train

APPF 2017 #9

Airbnb

Washed bedspread five times
My mom on my mind always
Vinegar rinse rocks!

*****

APPF 2017 #10 

Poem mail like a train
Connects sender and sendee
Tying thoughts unseen











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August Poetry Postcard 2017 - Inking/ Hunting

APPF 2017 # 7

Imagine the art

Secretly inking lady

Double entendre

******* 

APPF 2017 #8

Hunting Dish

Not for faint at heart
Image triggers aroma
Dutch hazepeper








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August Poetry Postcard Fest 2017 - Summer/ Fruit

APPF 2017 #5 

The art of picking
fruit beckons to be tasted
color coded ripe

*******

 APPF 2017 #6

High blush full body

Pick fruit with eye of artist

Object d'art to eat

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